济南学校

全国咨询电话

400-801-9655

首页 > 老师原创 >

环球王厚意 | G类雅思写作小作文高分范文赏析

2019-08-05 15:25:25 编辑:济南环球教育 浏览:(1037次)

雅思考试分为A类学术类和G类移民类,A类小作文为图表作文,G类小作文为书信类。那么今天来分析一下移民类小作文考官范文。

首先看一下题目:

After being involved in an accident, youwere looked after by another person. Write a special letter to express yourthanks.

1.You should write at least 150 words.

2.You should spend about 20 minutes on thistask.

首先我们需要理解题目,“在发生事故后,你被另一个人照顾。写一封特别的信来表达你的谢意。”所以这是写一封感谢信。

Dear John,

I am writing to express my heartfeltgratitude. I am referring to that unfortunate accident the otherday, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi. If it had not been for yourtimely assistance in giving me first aid and taking me to a nearby hospital, Ifear that the consequences might have been much more serious.

第一句话中的heartfelt gratitude表示衷心的感谢,多用于感谢信的开头。第二句话说明了事故的起因以及产生的后果。第三句使用了if引导的条件状语从句,表达了对方对自己帮助的重要性。

The doctor says that my broken leg ishealing well, and the bruises and cuts I suffered will soon be completelybetter. In addition, the taxi company has agreed to pay my hospital bills.Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in thatemergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome.

第二段报告了恢复情况,表示身体越来越健康了。第二句说明了理赔情况,其中quick-wittedresponse表示机智的反应。

Although nowadays many people talk aboutthe need to be unselfish and to help others, we see very few people practicingwhat they preach. But you showed by your selfless action that you are anexception. If there were more people like you, this world would be a much nicerplace.

Yourssincerely,

Ted

那么最后一段再次表达了自己的感谢,用了although引导的让步状语从句来再次表达自己的感谢。最后在右下角落款。


回复“姓名+电话+测试”预约免费水平测试

回复“姓名+电话+试听”预约免费试听课程

回复“姓名+电话+课程”领取近期课表+备考大礼包