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7.20雅思写作真题思路解析(附7分范文)及 7.27口语写作预测

2019-07-22 10:51:28 编辑:济南环球教育 浏览:(1140次)

7月倒数第二场的雅思笔试考试也结束啦,我们先来看一下这一次由余曰简老师带来的写作范文解析~

07-20  报告类 – 社会话题          

Many people aim to achieve a balance between work and other parts of lives,but few people achieve it. What are the causes of the problems ? How to overcome it?

 

题目大意:

人们寻求工作和生活的平衡。但很少人可以达到。原因是什么?如何解决?


思路:

  • 找原因的思路:从题目中最相关群体入手,如员工(个人经济压力),企业(加班文化)

  • 找办法的思路:联系原因,所有的办法和上文的原因一一吻合;同时确保逻辑的合理性,办法的能解决原因  


关键词:

  • work and other parts of lives:工作,生活其他方面(具体可以是家庭,社区活动等)


提纲梳理如下:  


范文

The balance between life and work has long been a problem that exhausts working individuals in this century. While various hypotheses have been put forward to explain the issue, I tend to analyze this problem from both individual and corporate aspect and provide some possible solutions.

From my perspective,why the majority fail to handle the relationship between companies and families is a symptom of problem to which I see the financial pressure as a main answer.Living in a consumer society, many individuals are inundated with a multitude of tasks, most of which are inextricably bound up with money, whether these be mortgage, private cars, medical insurance, and tuition fees for children. Only by pushing themselves to be workaholics can they earn more money to pay all bills.

Another problem that traps employees in the office might sound ridiculous but true – many bosses tend to equate the number of working hours with the performance of their underlings, which leads to the curse on employees in many businesses. One notorious example is the 996 mode that irritates millions of IT practitioners in China, meaning 9 am to 9 pm, 6 working days a week. What a pipe dream to talk about family life in a world moving in this direction!

Fortunately, this does not mean the end of the world for working adults and their families, while there are some measures we can implement to liberate employees from toiling. One option is for the government to initiate policy of tax reduction to those live on tight budget, therefore they might less likely to hunt for another part-time job just for more money. As well as a tax policy, a more stringent law against exploitation should be legislated, which will prohibit compulsory long working hours. Even awareness campaigns can play a part: the media could contribute to publicizing the long-term effects of work-life balance on improving work efficiency and productivity.  

In conclusion, it looks to me that the inequality between work and private life is a complicated problem that can be attributed to finance and cognition, both of which need to be handled by the joint efforts of administration and the media.  

相关词汇:

Hypothesis  推测  

be inundated with  忙于应付

inextricably  不可避免地

mortgage  房贷  

workaholic  工作狂  

trap   使陷于  

ridiculous  荒谬的

equate   等同于

underling  下属  

curse  诅咒  

irritate   使恼火

practitioner  从业者  

toil  过度操劳

 

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